Good Luck Mr. Jackson

Konkani lhan kotha: Good Luck Mr. Jackson "Marriages are made in heaven and accomplished on earth" Logn sorgar thavn bandun haddlolem asta, oxem ami mhonntat.  Logn mhonllear, ek nazuk sombondh eka daddlea ani ostore modem.  Ho sombondh borem bhaxen nibaunk ek khas kaido nam, nhoi mhunn ek pustok, zacher pollevn ek joddem aplo sovnsar korunk xokta.  Ho somoz bore bhaxen nibaunk zaitem pasiens ani somzikai zai poddta.  Oslo somoz aichea joddeam sovem zoborxi disona, odhik korun bail nokri korta ani ghorkara poros odhik duddu zoddta zalear, tiche kagod hatant dorunk zaina. Adlea tempar choddxeo ostoreo offisamni sirvis korinasleo. Teo fokot ghor-dhar ani kazarachea ekvottak zolmololea bhurgeank samballtalint. Tea tempar ghov- bailancho ekvott ekdom mozbut astalo. Atanche khallar, divors zatat toxe chante-pallar adim divors zai nasle.  Toxench, adle tempavelea bhurgeank TV, kompuitor, internet osleo sovloti nasleo. Mhonntoch, tanche mon ekdom sadem astalem. Dusre bhaxen ekdom inosent. Oxich ek adlea tempavelea ghorabeachi gozal. Ek dis sokallim Piedade (Pidu) santetayen bolkavant  boson aslem. To dis Aitar aslo. Bhurgim angnant khelltalim. Itlean, kale-holduvea rongachi ek taxi, tanche ghara islean  yeta ti, tannem polleli. Jack Santan (mothvea nanvan, Jackson), tacho ghorkar, viazik savn yevpache dis lagim pavlele. Dekun, Jackson bha zait mhunn, bolkayanchea humbrear  boslelem Pidu, ubem ravlem ani toch kai zalear pollevn astana, taxi tanchea darant thambli.  Tachea dolleani khuxallkaiechi dukham vhanvlim. Hoi! Piducho dhubav sarko aslo. Tancho put Lawrence (Lorsu), bapaik pollevn dhavim-dhavim vochun bapaik vengoilo. Taxi cholovpeachea adharan, foren vostumni bhorlolem samon, gharant bhitor haddlem.  Sogllim khuxall zaun samanacheo sutkexi ugodtalim. Lorsu, khaupachio ani khellanchea vostu sonspotalo zalear, Pidu garam masalo, kosmotik, ani chittir boroilolea pormonnem apnnalea bhoinnank, bhair-bhitor ghacheo vostu haddleat tancher nondor marit, ekan-ek vostu polletana, tachem tondd matxem ambott zalelem koxem distalem. Bhoinninche bhitor ghalcheo mustaki chittir boroilolea pormonnem eksarkeo haddloleo. Ghelea tin mhoynnem, ganvant poddlelea kimsanchea malaria piddek lagon, tageli kuddchi shape jirloli vo vozon unnem zaun tem barik zalelem. Bail kitle meren bhaglea ti, Jacksonank khobor naslolean, tannem haddleleo margeleo vostu tichea kuddik loose zateleo. Hench taka mottem pikasanv zalelem Ek dis Lorsu, bapain hadloleo chokleti bolsant bhorun lohu voson darant aslelea ambeachea khakdant boslo. Ek-ek korun chokleti khavpak laglo ani chokleticheo bhegoti khala udoitalo. Ganvche Filsu thoinchean pasar zatalem. Tannem Lorsuk vhoir ambeacher aslolo poilolo ani vicharlem  "Are baba kitem khata re " "Filsu-mana hanv ambeachi panam khatam", sotasot Lorsun zap dili. (tea tempar fotti koxeo marunk zai tem burgeank gomonaslem) "Are mostea, mhaka fottimartai? Pain haddloleo foren chokleti ektoch khatai mure? Jackson ghara aslear Piduche jivak bore distatem. Kedna-kednai tim saikolicher boson bazarant vetalim. Pidu ghorachea porsan udok ghalta zalear, Jackson taka bainchem udok kaddun ditalo. Tim sodanch ratchim chandneacher bolkavant boson mogan ghozali kortalim.  Bapui ghara aslear boro bazar haddtalo mhunn, Lorsu khuxi zatalo.  Tin mhoinnem zale Jackson viazik savn ghara ailear. Orxim tin mhoinnea borchea adinch porot viazik vetalo. Hea pavtti vospachi kainch khobor korina. Piduk ojap dislem.  Kitem zalem? Hea pautti lamb sutti kai kitem? Tem chintnamni poddlem. Jacksonank vicharunk taka borem disonaslem. Taka vaitt disot mhunn tem babdde oggi ravlem. Ek dis sokallim Piduk uttonk matso vell zalo. Adlea disa Jacksona borobor ghorantlem chodduch kam’ kelelem tea khatir, tacho jiv boroch toklolo.  Aturnavelem uttche uttun Jackson khoim asa tem pollevnk laglem. Soglea kuddini sodlo. Bolkavant bosla zait, punn, thoinsorui naslo. Goddie apleak uttunk vell zalo mhunn nidentlem zagoi nastona tintear bha ghelea asot, oso sumar kaddun tem aplea vavran gull zalem. Sodanche bhaxen angnant tem saron marunk laglem. Tanchea angnant ek vhoddlo ambeacho rukh aslo ani tachi panam zhoddon darant kochro zata mhunn, tem sodanch sokallim utton sarn martalem. Itlean tachi nodor rukache kandear (branch) poddli. Thoim ek dhove follir vhodd utramni boroilele aslem “Goodluck Mr. Jackson” Piduk sozmolem. Jackson konnak sangonastana viazik ghelo mhunn. Karan dor pautti to viazik vheta teddna tachi bail ani put taka veng marun roddtalim tem pollevnk tachean zai naslem. Dekun hea pautti to, aple kalliz zhodd korun lohu gharantlo bhair soron ghelo.  Jackson zanno aslo. Eka dadleachean aplem dhuh rokdench visrunk zata punn nhoi eke ostorechean. Oslea mogacha jodpeanchi, aichea kazari joddpeamni dekh ghevnchi.  Antancheo jodeo, matxe gharant tanv-tinv zalear, soroll kaideachea darar martat.  Divors file kortat. Oxem korun konnakuch faido zaina. Faido zata to vokilank. Karan divors kexi cholounk tanchi fee ghevunk zaun asa tancho dhondo……….. oxem tumkam disona? Norman Noronha http://www.goa-world.com/       Lapitt  http://aitaracheokaskuleo.blogspot.com/

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Octobr 4, 2011

Pisull'lolo Mog

Pisull'lolo Mog 

-Boroinar:  Norman Noronha

 Eke astig ani nanv voste komponent managerachi nokri kortolo Shri Ronaldo Kuveitt-chea vimantollar apnnalem samon check-in kortat tea vollir ubo aslolo. Tachea fuddem ek ostori ubi asloli ani ti check-in kortolea odhikarea thaim uloitali. Ticho ulovpacho avaz khoim tori adim aikolelea porim Shri Ronaldak dislem. Kannache pordde tea ostoreacha avazar nitt dovorun Shri Ronaldo to vollkicho avazchi yad korit astona, check-in  kortolea odhikarean mhontlem.

“You may please wait at the side until you make up your mind-----next passenger please!”

Samonanchem vozon subeij aslolean, voznank bhorpache duddu unnem korunk ti ostori poratali. Odhikarean sanglolea pormonnem vollir asloli ti, apnnalem samon ghevn patt portololi tea vellar tichi ani Ronaldachi nodor eka-mekak dhol’li. Ronaldo tika pollevn eksarko thotaklo. Ti ostori tachea adlea mogi Cynthia eksarkem rupachem aslem. Te ostorek Ronaldachem mukhavoll vollkichem koxem laglem. Dogaim ekuch dixen khoim tori sanddlolea monacha somdirant buskelim. Dolleanchi nodor haloinastona tim eka-mekak polloit astona itlo temp sandloli yad tanchi zagear yevn ekach avazar dogaimni mhonntlem? “Konn tum Cynthia? – Oi!!! Ani tum Ronaldo?”

 

 Dolleank mell’lloli dixtt kalzachea bhavnnank ugti korta mhonllear check-in kortolea odhikarian, Ronalda-k tachem samon, vozon mesinar ghalunk sanglem. Tem zatoch, hatant boarding pass ani passport ghevn to nitt Cynthia ubem aslolem thoinsor ghelo. Taka odhik polleta titlech tache kallzache dhobdhobe (pulse) vaddot ravle. Lagsar pavtoch tannem sottasot proxn kele:

“Cynthia tum hangasor Kuveitt? Keddnam pavlem? Koxem pavlem? Tuji bholaiki kosi? Ani tujem…”

"Puro puro.” Modench tondd ghalun Ronaldak fuddem ulovpak dinastona tem uloilem. “Hea tujea sogllea proxnache zapo hanv uprant ditam. Punn, sodeak ek vhoddlo proxn mhojea samkara asa to mhonnlear hem mhojem ek handbag samonan subeij bhorlam. To offisor kosoch aikona. Duddu bhorunk sangta, ani tevui khub chodd.”

 “Itlench? Kiteak bhielam? Mhoje lagim handbag na. Di tem mhojea hatan.”

“Thank you. Mhonntat nhi. Fatrak fator mellta tosoch monis mon’xak melltat. Kitlech vorsamni porot ekdam amchi bhett. Ani poilech bhettek tuzo adar”, Cynthia upakranchea ummalleamni uloilem.

Baroboruch dagaimni immigration check korun duty free shopar bhitor sorlim. Kuveitt-Goem Indian Airlines vimanacher vochunk khup Goykar pasinger duty shopar shopping kori. Kitem-i uloilem zalear tanche kanar poddtelem tea khatir, Shri Ronaldan, Cynthiak coffee shopar mellunk lipchoriam sinal kelem. Ghorjecheo vostu vikot ghetlea uprant Shri Ronaldo coffee shopar bosun Cynthiachi vatt polloit boslo.

“Kitlea vorsam amchi bhett?” Addlea eka mog kornarachea uballeachim dhukam dolleant haddit apli boska ghetana Cynthia zhodd talean uloilem.

Ekach kollejin tim xiktalim. Cynthia xikpan ekdom huxear aslem. Futtbol khellant Ronaldo bhouch huxear khelltalo. Thodde khepek luctures bunk marun khellunk vetalo. Dusrea disa chuklele obeas kollejicha librarin bosun Cynthia-cha adaran notes boroun ghetalo. Itlench nhoi.  To sozmonk na zalear somzaun Cynthia taka xikoitalem.  Kollejiche obeas xiktam-xiktam tannim mogacho obeasar hat bhonvdailo ani tim mogan poddlim.  Dogaimni sangatak B. Com pass keli.  Arthik (financial) prosthotik lagun Ronaldok fuddlem xikop korun zalem nam.  To rokdoch eke koponen kamak laglo Cynthia university-n voson M. Com meren xiklem. 

"Cynthia tum kitem ghetolem?" Rudolfan vicharlem. 

 “I’ll have coffee” 

"How about some snacks?"

“No its ok”. 

Ronald-an don kofik oddor dili. Goddielir nodor marli.Viman udnek vell aslolean tannem mhonntlem

"Sang tuji itlea tempaveli khobor. Yad zainam amchi nimnni bhett kedna zaleli poi ti. Kazar zaun bhurgim vaddlim astolim tumchim..........." Ronaldo fuddem ulouncho bond zalo. Cynthiacha dollean ghosghoxeanim dukham vanvtolim pollelim. Ronaldo thotaklo. Sorrbhonvtonim aslolo lok tankam polletalo. “Cynthia control yourself!!!! Kachabull monan Ronaldon mhontlem. 

"Futtkea noxibachem hanv. Avoy-Bapain zaiti girestkai divn mhaka kazar kelolem. Cheddo ekdom boro. London bori sirvis korta mhunn sangon, konn ek kharbarean ti soirik mhaka keloli. Kazar zatoch rokdench mhaka London velem. Thoinsor mhozo sonvsar kosllun poddlo. Mhozo ghorkar eke gore katicha ostorechea mogan aslo. Drugs ghetalo. Fokot aplea familichi khuxi puri korunk tannen mhozo sangath zodlolo.  Hem sogllem London pavtoch mhaka ghomun ailem. To kitlech pautti soro pivun sintidavin ghorant uxir pavtalo ani thoddde khepek yenastana rautalo Hanvem kharan vicharlem zalear Shut up you stupid Goan fool, mhaka kentalo. Goyant konakuch hi khobor gomoili na. Zaite toren sozmaylo. To sudortolo oxi vatt polloit ravlim",  handbegantlo lens kaddun vanvtelim dukham pusit Cynthian fuddem uloilem. "Ek dis chintunk naslele goddlem. Ghorkarache drugs overdose zaun to hea sovnsarak ontorlo. Thoddim vollkichi Goykaram aslim. Tanchea  adharan tachi kudd ghevun hanv ganv-ghara ailim.  Tachi ghorchim mhoje churchure korche bodlek mhonnonk laglim Ponnvotti khoinchi. Amcha putak khavun uddoilo.  Eksurponn sosunk zaina zaun hanv sarkim pixim zalim. Dekun mhojea avoy-bapaim mhaka portun ghara velem.  Mhojem dukh visrunk zai mhunn mhoje  mauxen mhaka Kuveiit haddlem. Hangasor hanv  eke komponin kam' kortalem."

 Steward-an mezar haddun dovorlolea kofik ghontt marit tem fuddem uloilem  "Mhoji mauxi toxinch ghorchim mhaka porot kazar korunk sodtalim.  Zaitto soiriko mhaka yetaleot , punn mhozo poilo ghorkar, ek drug addict aslo mhunn aikotoch, tankam dhubav zatalo. Taka goddiek AIDS duens aslem tem mhaka zalam zait mhunn. Ani hench kharan mhojea lagim konn kazar zaunk fuddem soronaslo.  Dusrem kazar zaupachi chintam antam hanvem soddun dileant. Mhojem visa residence cancel kelam ani porot vetam. Hanvem somazik vavr korunk yevzilam. Borexea NGO-cho sangath korunk ani mhojem udharon diun zaitem chedvancho fuddar boro zaunk vavrunk chintlam.  Toxench antanchi mog kornaram jim mogan fottovtat ani rokdich vik pivon, ghoddar poddon vo udkant udki marun, aplo jiv sompoitat toslim odchoninink sampoddloleanchi councelling korun adar divnk mhozo fuddlo haves zaun asa", Cynthian thoddeach utramni, punn apli lamb dukhi jivitachi kanni Shri Ronaldak sangli.  

Monneponnan Ronald koffik ghontt martalo. Tachi churchureanchi kanni oggeaponnan aikotalo. Taka zaitem uloun distalem. Punn adle ghave ugte korunk taka borem disonaslem.  Thondd monan kofiche bil farik korcha vellar, Cynthian vicharlem

“Why are you so silent? Come on speak something."

 "Cynthia fokot hanv gorib mhunn tuje avoy-bapain tuka mhoji ixttagott soddunk sanglem.  Tuji avoy tuka mhuntali.

Aago to xethkanicho por tuka kitem diunk xektolo?  Pai retired P&O Tarvotti, ani Ronald Moddganv sirvis korun tachean tachea mai- paiche pott bhorunk sarkem zaina ani tuka go to, koslem sukh ditolo?  Sodd tachi vatt. Tuje avoyn amcho panch vorsancho mog, ekach kinnan rever bandlele ghor, lharache udkan kosollta toxem kollsun udoilo. Khoim asat tichim tim utram?  Aiz amchem daktem aslolem ghor moddun bunglow ubo kela.  Mhoji ghorkarn mhojim bhurgim mhojea sangatak Kuveittit asat.   Mhoje avoyk dolleanche operasanv asa dekun, hanv ektoch Goem vetam.  Bhurgeancha iskolak lagon mhoji ghorkarnn mhojea sangata nam. Tuji ani mhoji okosmat bhett zaun amchem ek noxib mhontlear zata."  

Vimantollar announcement zalo. Goycha pasingerank boarding korchak sanglem. Boslolea zageavelim tim utthlim. Cynthiachi panvlam zhodd zait ghelim. Ronaldachea sobdani kitem tori sot lipun aslem. Vimanant boarding kortana dolle bhorun taka roddunk ailem. Avoy-n, tanchea niz mogacher addkolicho dhanddo marunk naslolo zalear,  aiz eka pisull'lolea fulla porim, niraxi jivit sarchem naslem.

- Norman Noronha
Navelim, Goa/Kuwait