Good Luck Mr. Jackson

Konkani lhan kotha: Good Luck Mr. Jackson "Marriages are made in heaven and accomplished on earth" Logn sorgar thavn bandun haddlolem asta, oxem ami mhonntat.  Logn mhonllear, ek nazuk sombondh eka daddlea ani ostore modem.  Ho sombondh borem bhaxen nibaunk ek khas kaido nam, nhoi mhunn ek pustok, zacher pollevn ek joddem aplo sovnsar korunk xokta.  Ho somoz bore bhaxen nibaunk zaitem pasiens ani somzikai zai poddta.  Oslo somoz aichea joddeam sovem zoborxi disona, odhik korun bail nokri korta ani ghorkara poros odhik duddu zoddta zalear, tiche kagod hatant dorunk zaina. Adlea tempar choddxeo ostoreo offisamni sirvis korinasleo. Teo fokot ghor-dhar ani kazarachea ekvottak zolmololea bhurgeank samballtalint. Tea tempar ghov- bailancho ekvott ekdom mozbut astalo. Atanche khallar, divors zatat toxe chante-pallar adim divors zai nasle.  Toxench, adle tempavelea bhurgeank TV, kompuitor, internet osleo sovloti nasleo. Mhonntoch, tanche mon ekdom sadem astalem. Dusre bhaxen ekdom inosent. Oxich ek adlea tempavelea ghorabeachi gozal. Ek dis sokallim Piedade (Pidu) santetayen bolkavant  boson aslem. To dis Aitar aslo. Bhurgim angnant khelltalim. Itlean, kale-holduvea rongachi ek taxi, tanche ghara islean  yeta ti, tannem polleli. Jack Santan (mothvea nanvan, Jackson), tacho ghorkar, viazik savn yevpache dis lagim pavlele. Dekun, Jackson bha zait mhunn, bolkayanchea humbrear  boslelem Pidu, ubem ravlem ani toch kai zalear pollevn astana, taxi tanchea darant thambli.  Tachea dolleani khuxallkaiechi dukham vhanvlim. Hoi! Piducho dhubav sarko aslo. Tancho put Lawrence (Lorsu), bapaik pollevn dhavim-dhavim vochun bapaik vengoilo. Taxi cholovpeachea adharan, foren vostumni bhorlolem samon, gharant bhitor haddlem.  Sogllim khuxall zaun samanacheo sutkexi ugodtalim. Lorsu, khaupachio ani khellanchea vostu sonspotalo zalear, Pidu garam masalo, kosmotik, ani chittir boroilolea pormonnem apnnalea bhoinnank, bhair-bhitor ghacheo vostu haddleat tancher nondor marit, ekan-ek vostu polletana, tachem tondd matxem ambott zalelem koxem distalem. Bhoinninche bhitor ghalcheo mustaki chittir boroilolea pormonnem eksarkeo haddloleo. Ghelea tin mhoynnem, ganvant poddlelea kimsanchea malaria piddek lagon, tageli kuddchi shape jirloli vo vozon unnem zaun tem barik zalelem. Bail kitle meren bhaglea ti, Jacksonank khobor naslolean, tannem haddleleo margeleo vostu tichea kuddik loose zateleo. Hench taka mottem pikasanv zalelem Ek dis Lorsu, bapain hadloleo chokleti bolsant bhorun lohu voson darant aslelea ambeachea khakdant boslo. Ek-ek korun chokleti khavpak laglo ani chokleticheo bhegoti khala udoitalo. Ganvche Filsu thoinchean pasar zatalem. Tannem Lorsuk vhoir ambeacher aslolo poilolo ani vicharlem  "Are baba kitem khata re " "Filsu-mana hanv ambeachi panam khatam", sotasot Lorsun zap dili. (tea tempar fotti koxeo marunk zai tem burgeank gomonaslem) "Are mostea, mhaka fottimartai? Pain haddloleo foren chokleti ektoch khatai mure? Jackson ghara aslear Piduche jivak bore distatem. Kedna-kednai tim saikolicher boson bazarant vetalim. Pidu ghorachea porsan udok ghalta zalear, Jackson taka bainchem udok kaddun ditalo. Tim sodanch ratchim chandneacher bolkavant boson mogan ghozali kortalim.  Bapui ghara aslear boro bazar haddtalo mhunn, Lorsu khuxi zatalo.  Tin mhoinnem zale Jackson viazik savn ghara ailear. Orxim tin mhoinnea borchea adinch porot viazik vetalo. Hea pavtti vospachi kainch khobor korina. Piduk ojap dislem.  Kitem zalem? Hea pautti lamb sutti kai kitem? Tem chintnamni poddlem. Jacksonank vicharunk taka borem disonaslem. Taka vaitt disot mhunn tem babdde oggi ravlem. Ek dis sokallim Piduk uttonk matso vell zalo. Adlea disa Jacksona borobor ghorantlem chodduch kam’ kelelem tea khatir, tacho jiv boroch toklolo.  Aturnavelem uttche uttun Jackson khoim asa tem pollevnk laglem. Soglea kuddini sodlo. Bolkavant bosla zait, punn, thoinsorui naslo. Goddie apleak uttunk vell zalo mhunn nidentlem zagoi nastona tintear bha ghelea asot, oso sumar kaddun tem aplea vavran gull zalem. Sodanche bhaxen angnant tem saron marunk laglem. Tanchea angnant ek vhoddlo ambeacho rukh aslo ani tachi panam zhoddon darant kochro zata mhunn, tem sodanch sokallim utton sarn martalem. Itlean tachi nodor rukache kandear (branch) poddli. Thoim ek dhove follir vhodd utramni boroilele aslem “Goodluck Mr. Jackson” Piduk sozmolem. Jackson konnak sangonastana viazik ghelo mhunn. Karan dor pautti to viazik vheta teddna tachi bail ani put taka veng marun roddtalim tem pollevnk tachean zai naslem. Dekun hea pautti to, aple kalliz zhodd korun lohu gharantlo bhair soron ghelo.  Jackson zanno aslo. Eka dadleachean aplem dhuh rokdench visrunk zata punn nhoi eke ostorechean. Oslea mogacha jodpeanchi, aichea kazari joddpeamni dekh ghevnchi.  Antancheo jodeo, matxe gharant tanv-tinv zalear, soroll kaideachea darar martat.  Divors file kortat. Oxem korun konnakuch faido zaina. Faido zata to vokilank. Karan divors kexi cholounk tanchi fee ghevunk zaun asa tancho dhondo……….. oxem tumkam disona? Norman Noronha http://www.goa-world.com/       Lapitt  http://aitaracheokaskuleo.blogspot.com/

 [ Amchea kherit dhinvas Lino B. Dourado ani Gaspar Almeida-k
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Octobr 4, 2011

Konkani Lekh: VISVAS NAM - Norman Noronha

KONKANI LEKH:
VISVAS NAM                          - Boroupi: Norman Noronha


Amchea ganvant ghodlole eke ghoddnecho ugddas yeta.
Dog mog kornaram aslim. Rossi ani Rudolf.
Rossi xikpant titlem uxear naslem dekhun S.S.C. pas korun eka beauty parlor-an beautician-acho kurs kortalem. Rudolf ek lhanxe komponin Sales Representative mhunn vaurtalo.

Ek Novea Vorsa disa ganvchea bhurgeam ani loka pasot, ganvant vorsavolicho sports aslo Rudolph ani Rossi sui ani sutt (thread-needle) khellan partner koxi aslim. Suiechea burakantlean Rossi dago ghalunk tozvit kortanam Rudolph tachea dolleant poit aslo. Auchit Rossichi nodor tacher poddli ani teach vellar tanchi dogaimchi nodor ek zali anik dogaim eka mekak kitem sangunk sodtat oxem tankam dislem………

Dusre disa Rudolf kamank vetana tannem Rossik lift dili ani beauty parlorakode soddlem. Tisre dis ani choutea disa toxech zalem. Orxim Rudolph taka apli mogachi itsa sangunk sodtalo punn boll zainaslem. Punn choutea disa Rossik kamank pavoitona tannem kallzak dhir ghetlo ani Rossik sanglem apleak khuxi asa mhunn tachi ixttagott zoddunk. Tem murgottot hansun parloran bhitor sorlem. Panchvea disa Rossi sogllea sontosan Parloran vosunk mhunn bhair sorlem sozmon Rudoph meutolo mhunn, punn tea dissa to mevonk nam. Rossiche kalzant mogachi kitt suru zali. Dekhun to keddna porot mevtolo oxem tem poitalem punn babdem niraxi zalem. Sovia disa Aitar aslo. Rossi borexe kopdde nhessun misak vetana auchit ek motorbike tachea fuddem thambli.
Vollon fattlean poiloilear Rudolph! Rossi sarkem uchambol zalem. Hoch boro vell somzun Rudolphan poirche disa vicharlolea proxnacho ugddas kelo. Tachea koddlean oi vo nam zap mellpache vatter ubo ravlo. Jiber aslolea porim Rossin soroll mhontlem “I love you too”, ani teddna savn tim mogan poddlim. Rudolph, Rossik niamit (daily) lift diunk laglo. Bore nib ghevn kamachi guttli marun to taka date ditalo. Dorya deger vochun magache ubav sangatak sarunk laglim. Lohu-lohu korun tanchea dhatt moagchi khobor tanchea ghorchenk kollit zali. Ixttagottichi gozal tanchea ghorchea sovem uloili ten’a tanchea mogacher donui ghorabean addkoll addunk nam. Tim huskea vinnem zalim Dis, mhoinem soron sumar tin vorsam oxinch tim mogan bonvlim. Amchea ghara fatlean, xettantlean ek rosto asa. Tacher zoborxi vahatuk (traffic) aso na. Taka ami Love Road mhunntat. Him mogiam sodanch hea rostear distalim.

Oxench ek dis Rudolphan chintlem pordesant vosonk. Karan Goenchea pagaran don poixe tachean samballunk zainaslem. Tannem ek Agenta lagim sirvis poloili. Rosik kainch ek sangonk nam. Vochpachem sogllem tharear poddtoch ani visa hatant poddun fudlea mhoineant Gulfak vochpavhe vatter asa oxem Rossik kollit kelem. Rossi eke vatten sintir zalem nodre bhair to zatolo mhunn punn dusre vatten khuxen bhorlem karan tacho Rudolph antam borem pagar ghetolo zachi tankam goroz asli. Tannen khuxen aplea ghorcheank sanglem punn boltench ghodlem. Rossicho foren botticher kam’ korpi bapui nigtoch viaz marun ailolo. Rossichim avoy-bapui kazar zalear xivai Rofolphak bhailea desan vochun mellchenam mhunnn sangtoch Rudolph kachabull zalo. Rudolph apli arthik (financial) oddchon uktayli.
“Uncle mhoje xim kazaracho despez korunk poixe nant”
“Tum fokot kazar zaunk toyar za. Duddvancho khorch ami kortolim” Rossichea Bapain sanglem.

Babdo moga pasot tanche kustar kazar zalo ani eka mhoinean tachi visa ba stamp korun Gulfant gelo. Hea vatten Rossi eksurem zalem. Rudolfache gharant tachi zantti avoi asli. Tem ekmulea jivitacher bejarlolem. Kamar astonam vell sortalo punn ghora yetoch eksurponn khavunk yetalem. Rudolphacho chodduch ugddas yetalo. Rudolphakui tench bhogtalem. Osle poristithicher ek voros sompun gelem. Tim dogaim eka-mekak SMS daddtalim, fone kortalim ani kednaim internet chatar bostalim. Bailek aplea sangatak vegim haddchea khatir Rudolph zaito doddpoddtalo. Xevttim to sufoll zalo ani tannen oxi SMS daddli “Atam khuxechi dis lagim asat” tuji visa mevli punn bailecho reply vachun taka shok zalo “Mhaka Gulfak yevpachi khuxi na” Orxim tem sodanch apleak vor, vor mhunn taka bejar kortalem ani atam auchit kitem zalem??? Kitem zait gai hachem karan?

Eksurponnachi vaj ailoli. Kamank vetle kodden taka eka ankvar cheddeacho mog zal’lo. Tancho novo mog konnak khobor nastona brooch netan choltalo. Rudolphan koxei korun bailek raji keli apleaxim haddpak anik xekim Rossi Gulfak pavlem. Poile rati tem sanddlolea porim diso. Rudolphan vicharlear tem mhunnonk laglem apleak maim-paicho ugddas yeta mhunn………oxe thodde dis sorle.

Ek mhoino zatoch apleak Gulf anvddunk nam ani dusrim nibam divn porot Goem yevunk toyar zalem. Khorem mhonllear taka tachea novea mogachi umollxik ani kuddichi ruch lagloli.

Rossi Goeam pavttoch tannem Rudolfak nirop pattoilo. Rossin, sanglem apleak tacho anik mog nam. Divorce diun apnnak meklem kor. Hem aikon Rudolfache kuddint rogot suklem. To sozmolo tem apli fokana korta mhunn. Porot vicharlear taka toch zabab meulo “Maka Divorce Zai” Anik dusro upai nam zaun Rudolfan, Rossin courier-an daddlelim Divorce kagddacher soi keli. He bhaxen MOGAN KAZAR VISVAS NA ZAUN DIVORCE ZALO” Rossi aplea novea mogia lagim kazar zalem. Babdo Rudolph toxoch urlo.
Hea lhan kothetlian hanv itlench sangonk sodtam kim aicheo zodio (couples) aplea sangatiak visvaxi ravona. Toxench soglle nirnoi tankam sotasot ghevunk zai tim ekamekak sozmona zoxi adlim zoddim sozmotalim.

Ek kazari jivit sufoll zatolem zalear ekmekacher visvas gorjecho. Kazari jivitachi bhuniad mhontlear eka mekak respet-man divop ani eka mekakcheo chukio bhogsun ekamekak sozmon ghevop.
Somzikaieche amche ghorabe zaunk mhoje anvdde.!!!!!!



[Kherit dhinvas, Lino B. Dourado-k, www.goa-world.com]